Elizabeth: I like the pacing of this digital poem. The transitions are clever and exciting.
Your poem is beautiful and this is a very complete composition.
Brittany: Excellent PPT digital poem. Love the music, pacing, imagery and transitions. You even changed the directionality of the text. On a couple of slides, the words were cut short from view.
Zak, this is an excellent poem! You chose vibrant and thoughtful images and the music was excellent. Your voice is a bit soft....could you redo the voiceover with a microphone headset
Lori- this is an excellent digital poem. Your voice is very clear, the poem meaningful, and made more so by your choice of imagery and music. Credits were clear and slow enough to read carefully. Great job!
Brook, Your poem is very meaningful as connected with the novel. I like how it is recorded in a coffee shop and the music is very appropriate. Good choice of imagery. Very nice digital poem.
Teri, Your poem is special because it is so personally connected to both the novel and your own children and family. The personal photos are an excellent touch. Great job narrating this digital poem.
Kelly, This is a very unique poem. I love the fact that it plays upon the sentence in the novel that warned of the horrors of war. Very expressive as always! Excellent choice of images and music.
Digital Poetry Student Work
Elizabeth: I like the pacing of this digital poem. The transitions are clever and exciting.
Your poem is beautiful and this is a very complete composition.
Brittany: Excellent PPT digital poem. Love the music, pacing, imagery and transitions. You even changed the directionality of the text. On a couple of slides, the words were cut short from view.
Katina, very effective short digital poem. I enjoyed how the text seemed in sync with the rhythm of the music. Excellent choice of music and imagery.
Michelle- your poem stopped shortly after it began playing. Check and see if it is working for you. I was disappointed because it looked so good!
It worked for me. Here's the link to the youtube page. Let me know...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4YJTUFzn3vc
Danielle, you did a nice job with this poem. The images were well chosen and the pacing was easy to read each line. Nice choice of music.
Very provocative music Emily!!! Interesting poem. With the choice of music - it provokes an eerie mood. The images, too were extra-terrestrial!
Zak, this is an excellent poem! You chose vibrant and thoughtful images and the music was excellent. Your voice is a bit soft....could you redo the voiceover with a microphone headset
Lori- this is an excellent digital poem. Your voice is very clear, the poem meaningful, and made more so by your choice of imagery and music. Credits were clear and slow enough to read carefully. Great job!
Amanda, this is an excellent digital poem. Great choice of images, cool transitions, upbeat song and clear credits. Very nice job!
Brook, Your poem is very meaningful as connected with the novel. I like how it is recorded in a coffee shop and the music is very appropriate. Good choice of imagery. Very nice digital poem.
Teri, Your poem is special because it is so personally connected to both the novel and your own children and family. The personal photos are an excellent touch. Great job narrating this digital poem.
Stephanie,
I can not view this poem. Could you make it public?
Kelly, This is a very unique poem. I love the fact that it plays upon the sentence in the novel that warned of the horrors of war. Very expressive as always! Excellent choice of images and music.